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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

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I need to write my prospective supervisor asking for his consent to help supervise my doctorial thesis. Below is what I have been able to come up with. But I'm not sure if it is captivating enough.
Dear Professor,
My name is ABC, I am 26yers old and I come from (my country). Currently, I am enrolled for my MSC in nutritional Science in (my university) south Korea, which I am scheduled to complete this year June. Professor, upon my completion, I would want to enroll for my phd in (professors university).Precisely, into school of public health. I am writing to kindly ask you to supervise me for my research because I am very much interested in you research area and currently that is I am researching on for my MSC. I look forward to having a great as a member of your research team if only you give me the opportunity. I will be much glad to tap from your great stock of knowledge. Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
ABC .
  

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Anonymous But I'm not sure if it is captivating enough. Whatever about it being captivating, it's certainly not detailed enough. You should at least explain what area(s) of research you are interested in.

  • Anonymous But I'm not sure if it is captivating enough.
  • Whatever about it being captivating, it's certainly not detailed enough.
  • You should at least explain what area(s) of research you are interested in.
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AnonymousBut I'm not sure if it is captivating enough.
Whatever about it being captivating, it's certainly not detailed enough. You should at least explain what area(s) of research you are interested in.

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