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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
I need correction
i want to know if this parapraph is correct.
i gave u flower, i gave u cake,
with a big hope i did not fake,
i really meant it for a god sake,
i wish u love me and we can remake.
i gave u flower, i gave u cake,
with a big hope i did not fake,
i really meant it for a god sake,
i wish u love me and we can remake.
Top answer
It is awful, on all counts. Your best bet is to give it to her as it is-- she may find some charm in it.
- It is awful, on all counts.
- Your best bet is to give it to her as it is-- she may find some charm in it.
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It is awful, on all counts. Your best bet is to give it to her as it is-- she may find some charm in it.
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