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I dreamed that I was in Puerto Rico. In my dream, I went to visit
my family. They invited me to the beach. They told me to bring food.
Then they told me to bring extra clothes. I asked why would I bring
clothes if I am not going to swim. They told me the water was warm,
that I should go swimming. But I defused to go swimming. After that,
they invited me to watch a movie with them. I asked what kind of
movie are we going to watch? They said that we're going to watch a scary movie.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

I dreamed that I was in Puerto Rico. In my dream, I went to visit

my family. They invited me to the beach. They told me to bring food.

Then they told me to bring extra clothes. I asked why I would bring

clothes if I were not going to swim. They told me the water was warm

and that I should go swimming, but I refused. After that,

they invited me to watch a movie with them. I asked what kind of

movie we were going to watch. They said that we were going to watch a scary one.

Your writing is pretty good. However, you might like to try to join some of your short sentences together. That would make your writing a bit more natural.

Best wishes, Clive

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