I need all help I can get with these HARD SENTENCES?

Could you please help me correct these sentences grammatically?

1 I hate when I call someone about something I already know the answer to.
2 If you said one third of the things i said to you, i'd cry because I love you.
3 How is the movie rated?/What is the movie rated? It's a 9/10 according to him.
4 The length of the report/How long the report is depends on how many rooms there are in the hotel. It'll never be longer than 2 pages here.
5 I'm the judge of who's the best player/I judge who the best player is.
6 I used to not need it to be dark to sleep, now if the curtains are draw I can't sleep.
7 I can't wait to be tomorrow.
8 What's the first this you look at in/about a woman?
9 I don't see why the hotel would be closed/why the hotel is closed unless it had plans to renovate.
10 Despite/in spite of the beautiful things your country has to offer, I'm going to stay here in mine.

Thank you so much