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Pa_ Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

I need advice for 3 lines

Hi curently applying in some foreign country, i need to send some cover letter .

I would realy apreciate if someone that is very fluent/bilingual/native speaker could help me .

What do you think about that :

Thank you very very very very mutch !

"Being an investor on financial markets, I expect to discover financial services to perform my career there. My interest in audit and my awareness of the CobiT, motivate me all the more that I am convinced that such a mission will be humanly and professionally rewarding. I am confident that my personality and my capacities will give satisfaction. "

By the way Emotion: embarrassed
"I wrote technical specifications, developed (PHP), tested and presented solutions which distribute on Internet french administrative and legal informations (BOAMP, BALO,...)."
  

Top answer

Thanks to Optilang , for his contribution. He have help me to rephrase my last paragraph ! Big thanks for it Dear Madam, Dear Sir, The xxxxxx is a bank with a significant history and a global reputation.

— Pa_

  • Thanks to Optilang , for his contribution.
  • He have help me to rephrase my last paragraph !
  • Big thanks for it Dear Madam, Dear Sir, The xxxxxx is a bank with a significant history and a global reputation.
  • The possibility to take part in the evolution of an information system that is complex by its history, critical by its size is a challenge that holds my interest.
  • This motivation is increased by my affection for the financial sector, my attraction for intercultural experiences as well as the xxxxx’s corporate values.
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Thanks to Optilang, for his contribution. He have help me to rephrase my last paragraph !

Big thanks for it Emotion: smile
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