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Kateb25 Posted 18 years ago
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I need a sentence checked....PLEASE!

I'm new on here and I really need a sentence checked. It if for my class Writing for Mass Media and it covers Passivity and punctuation..and for some reason I just can't not wrap my brain around what the problem is with this sentence....

South Korean and Afgan officials searched for a meeting place Thursday after agreeing to hold face to face talks with the Taliban to seek the release of the remaining 21 South Korean captives, a chief negotiator said.

This sentence is fiction.....but I really need help finding what is wrong with it!

Thanks!
  

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Hi, Welcome to the Forum. I'm new on here and I really need a sentence checked. and for some reason I just can't not wrap my brain around what the problem is with this sentence..

— Clive

  • Hi, Welcome to the Forum.
  • I'm new on here and I really need a sentence checked.
  • and for some reason I just can't not wrap my brain around what the problem is with this sentence..
  • South Korean and Afgan officials searched for a meeting place Thursday after agreeing to hold face to face talks with the Taliban to seek the release of the remaining 21 South Korean captives, a chief negotiator said.
  • but I really need help finding what is wrong with it!
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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

I'm new on here and I really need a sentence checked. It if for my class Writing for Mass Media and it covers Passivity and punctuation..and for some reason I just can't not wrap my brain around what the problem is with this sentence..

South Korean and Afgan officials searched for a meeting place Thursday after agreeing to hold face to face talk
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