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Soufan Posted 12 years ago
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I need a help to post something on Facebook

Hello guys! I need your help to correct my Post on Facebook ..

I've deleted WhatsApp and soon I'll delete Viber and BBM.
You can contact me on KIK
Username: testusername
NOTE: Please don't share my username this message is only for close friends Emotion: smile
Thank you!

Is it correct like that ?? If not, please correct it to me..
Thank you in advance guys and sorry for bothering you!
  

Top answer

This is mostly fine. However, the penultimate sentence is a run-on sentence (and also is missing its full stop). You can write this: Please don't share my username; this message is only for close friends.

— GPY

  • This is mostly fine.
  • However, the penultimate sentence is a run-on sentence (and also is missing its full stop).
  • You can write this: Please don't share my username; this message is only for close friends.
  • You could also use a dash instead of a semicolon, or you could start a new sentence.
  • I would put a colon after "KIK".
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This is mostly fine. However, the penultimate sentence is a run-on sentence (and also is missing its full stop). You can write this:

Please don't share my username; this message is only for close friends.

You could also use a dash instead of a semicolon, or you could start a new sentence.

I would put a colon after "KIK".
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Thank you very much GPY ! You learned me many English words and how to write a correct sentence .. I'm really happy .. Thanks again Emotion: smile
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