i need a correction and editing of my motivation letter plz

I can explain my main motivation for this important step in my life by stating that I am a determined person, with great ambition, and a positive attitude.

Since my childhood, I have dreamed of becoming a doctor. I was encouraged by my Mom to be a surgeon one day. I was influenced by my uncle when i saw his humanitarian work and how he helped to ease his patients’ pain. I was determined to do my best in order to be a doctor, and I was actually able to finish school with a grade that allows me to study any field I want.

Medicine was my first choice. When I started studying at university, I came into contact with scientific research and new achievements in this field, and ever since then I have had another ambition, which is to have an impact in the field of scientific research in surgery after my graduation.

I have chosen Germany because of the advances its universities have made in all specialties, particularly in Surgery, and for the possibilities available for students to build their potential and progress at all levels. Last, but not least the reputation of the graduates and the opportunity of getting job in UAE is excellent achieved. German society is shaped by a plurality of lifestyles and truly different ethnic diversity. Besides all I enjoy a challenge particularly towards a rewarding objectives which make me think to choose Germany to have an opportunity to work competently in professional environment in order to gain personal growth and technical knowledge of modern techniques and seek a challenging career in dynamic environment where my knowledge can be enhanced with the latest trends to become the part of the modern age.

I want to learn the German language because I will study in Germany, so that is an opportunity to perfect my knowledge of this global language among native speakers. That will allow me to integrate into German society and to get to know the great German culture better. Furthermore, my colleagues, who studied in Germany, advised me that mastering this language will without a doubt open new doors for me.

I will put the utmost effort into finishing my studies and achieving the best possible results, I am certain that with my intellectual skills and volition I will be a good part of this promotion program to get exposure to health services in different countries through clinical attachments and electives. After completing my postgraduate studies and being highly specialized in one of the branches of surgery. I will be proud to come back to UAE to provide a high standard of care to my community. An opportunity to study in Germany will broaden my horizons and will give me an opportunity to gain a world class education.