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Chameleon Upadhyaya Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I m helping my friend please someone correct this paragraph

I was born as an elder daughter in my family. I was born in this house and grown up. My parents taught me our culture, tradition and language in this family. The culture I have learnt has a maximum influence in my family.
  

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I am an elder daughter. I was born and grew up in this house. My parents taught me our culture, tradition and l anguage.

  • I am an elder daughter.
  • I was born and grew up in this house.
  • My parents taught me our culture, tradition and l anguage.
  • The culture I have learnt has been a major influence on us all.
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I am an elder daughter. I was born and grew up in this house. My parents taught me our culture, tradition and language. The culture I have learnt has been a major influence on us all.
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Thank you Mister, I have few para can you please help me correct ?

My father has been struggled his whole life to get us a higher education. He is a hardworking man and always made sacrifices to his kids for their better life and better future. This is a small beautiful family we have made it together.

I always had a dream of becoming a successful female writer in my life unfor

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