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Shirley W Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I Love Winter
Dear teachers, below is an essay by me, would highly appreciate any correctings and modifications by you. Thank you very much in advance!---------
I Love Winter
On Jan 3rd 2010, Beijing had a heavy snow, which was the heaviest snow it had ever had since 1951. And we did not have school on the next day, Jan 4th. I was so happy at that time, not because of having a day off, but that winter had come at last! Because I love winter.
In Beijing, winter is cold, snowy, harsh, and sometimes the cold wind in winter mornings even makes you feel outrageous. But I love winter nevertheless. Why?
Winter is a beautiful and lovely season, when it snows, all buildings, trees, streets… and everything is in white, the whole world becomes white and clean. When you take a deep breath after snow, it makes you feel comfortable and encouraging, life is beautiful! Everytime when we classmates make a snowman and throw snowballs at each other, we’ll have a great time. Winter is lovely.
Winter is a season of love and kindness. As we all know, Spring Festival, the most important festival for Chinese people falls on winter days as well. It is when all family members get together, just like Christmas in the West. All people living away from home will go back after a year-long hard work. And all family members will eat big dinners together, with the rejoicing and festivity atmosphere not only filling every household, but spreading to streets and lanes.
Winter is also a hard season to me for its coldness, just like it is for many people. But I think the coldness is like difficulties. In our life, there are various difficulties in our way, and we need to overcome many difficulties before we can enjoy a success. So, I love winter, I love working hard to win successes.
Great success is like a colorful spring, I love winter is because I love spring best! As known by many people today, there is a beautiful sentence reads: if winter comes, can spring be far behind? I love winter because there is a beautiful spring in my mind, I love winter.
I Love Winter
On Jan 3rd 2010, Beijing had a heavy snow, which was the heaviest snow it had ever had since 1951. And we did not have school on the next day, Jan 4th. I was so happy at that time, not because of having a day off, but that winter had come at last! Because I love winter.
In Beijing, winter is cold, snowy, harsh, and sometimes the cold wind in winter mornings even makes you feel outrageous. But I love winter nevertheless. Why?
Winter is a beautiful and lovely season, when it snows, all buildings, trees, streets… and everything is in white, the whole world becomes white and clean. When you take a deep breath after snow, it makes you feel comfortable and encouraging, life is beautiful! Everytime when we classmates make a snowman and throw snowballs at each other, we’ll have a great time. Winter is lovely.
Winter is a season of love and kindness. As we all know, Spring Festival, the most important festival for Chinese people falls on winter days as well. It is when all family members get together, just like Christmas in the West. All people living away from home will go back after a year-long hard work. And all family members will eat big dinners together, with the rejoicing and festivity atmosphere not only filling every household, but spreading to streets and lanes.
Winter is also a hard season to me for its coldness, just like it is for many people. But I think the coldness is like difficulties. In our life, there are various difficulties in our way, and we need to overcome many difficulties before we can enjoy a success. So, I love winter, I love working hard to win successes.
Great success is like a colorful spring, I love winter is because I love spring best! As known by many people today, there is a beautiful sentence reads: if winter comes, can spring be far behind? I love winter because there is a beautiful spring in my mind, I love winter.
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On Jan 3 rd 2010, Beijing had a heavy snow, which was the heaviest snow it had ever had since 1951.
- On Jan 3 rd 2010, Beijing had a heavy snow, which was the heaviest snow it had ever had since 1951.
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On Jan 3rd 2010, Beijing had a heavy snow, which was the heaviest snow it had ever had since 1951.
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Dear teachers, I've just revised my last paragraph as my final, thank you very much!
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Great success is like a colo
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Very beautiful what you wrote and it is so wonderful to know that others love this jewel-like season. I so agree with you. I have this notion the winter awakens the spring inside of us, as it pushes us inside. If your interior self has spring...winter will awaken it and you will feel spring all inside you while you bask in the winter. Like the tulip bulb that is happily resting under the snow
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