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Mezzopiano Posted 6 years ago
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I like the analogy that open the business now is similar to when you cross the street

I wonder if someone could proofread these sentences about my opinion on opening businesses? Thank you.

I like the analogy that open the business now is similar to when you cross the street. There’s a risk of getting killed but you almost have no other choices

  

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mezzopiano my opinion on opening businesses In your version, you need "opening businesses now" instead of "open the business now" and a period at the end. Otherwise, it's fine. I like the analogy that opening businesses now is similar to when you cross the street.

  • mezzopiano my opinion on opening businesses In your version, you need "opening businesses now" instead of "open the business now" and a period at the end.
  • Otherwise, it's fine.
  • I like the analogy that opening businesses now is similar to when you cross the street.
  • There’s a risk of getting killed but you almost have no other choices.
  • Here's my version for your comparison.
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mezzopianomy opinion on opening businesses

In your version, you need "opening businesses now" instead of "open the business now" and a period at the end. Otherwise, it's fine.

I like the analogy that opening businesses now is similar to when you cross the street. There’s a risk of getting killed but you almost have no other choices.

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