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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day...
Please edit/correct the following paragraph.
I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day and you know this. I was just sounding like an idiot. Please forgive me. I'm feeling so much empty these days without you. Please call me or come to Gmail chat. If I don't respond on chat, that means I'm away from my computer, in that case ring me twice on cell phone and then hang up. I will come to chat. I have many things to talk to you. The more I come to know this world, the more I'm convinced that you are the most adorable human I hav ever seen. I love you more than anything. You are the only person for whom I can do anything. With lots of love. Take care.
I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day and you know this. I was just sounding like an idiot. Please forgive me. I'm feeling so much empty these days without you. Please call me or come to Gmail chat. If I don't respond on chat, that means I'm away from my computer, in that case ring me twice on cell phone and then hang up. I will come to chat. I have many things to talk to you. The more I come to know this world, the more I'm convinced that you are the most adorable human I hav ever seen. I love you more than anything. You are the only person for whom I can do anything. With lots of love. Take care.
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Hi, I'm really not good at correcting anything, but let me say what I would change: I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day and you know this it . I was just sounding sounded like an idiot.
- Hi, I'm really not good at correcting anything, but let me say what I would change: I know you are mad at me.
- I didn't mean anything that day and you know this it .
- I was just sounding sounded like an idiot.
- Please forgive me.
- I'm feeling so much empty these days, without you.
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Hi,
I'm really not good at correcting anything, but let me say what I would change:
I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day and you knowthis it. I was just sounding sounded like an idiot. Please forgive me. I'm feeling so much empty these days, without you. Please call me or come to Gmail chat. If I don't respond on
I'm really not good at correcting anything, but let me say what I would change:
I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day and you know
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I know you are mad at me. I didn't mean anything that day and you know it. I was just acting like an idiot. Please forgive me. I'm feeling so much empty these days without you. Please call me or come to Gmail chat. If I don't respond on chat, that means I'm away from my computer
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