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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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I know this is a long sentence, but is it completely clear and correct?

Following the War of the Lance, the people of Kalaman, who Gilthanas had defended courageously during the attacks by the dragonarmies in the final days of the conflict, asked the elven hero to be their Lord Mayor, which was an offer that he graciously accepted.
  

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cboutin3 is it completely clear and correct? 'whom', not 'who'. Delete 'which was'.

— Mister Micawber

  • cboutin3 is it completely clear and correct?
  • 'whom', not 'who'.
  • Delete 'which was'.
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cboutin3is it completely clear and correct?
'whom', not 'who'.
Delete 'which was'.
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