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Pamela81 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
I know it is wrong but I do not know how to correct it!!
Hi,
please help me with this sentence! I know it doesn´t sound good but I have no idea how to correct it!
"Sorry for keeping you waiting so long but our project manager was very busy.
Today you´ll get the price for the sent stand design B. For this reason I want to ask you which other fairs will you take part to so we can calculate a good price if you will sign a 3 years-contract with us"
Thanks for any feedback!
PAMELA
please help me with this sentence! I know it doesn´t sound good but I have no idea how to correct it!
"Sorry for keeping you waiting so long but our project manager was very busy.
Today you´ll get the price for the sent stand design B. For this reason I want to ask you which other fairs will you take part to so we can calculate a good price if you will sign a 3 years-contract with us"
Thanks for any feedback!
PAMELA
Top answer
Pretty good, actually. I suggest: Sorry for keeping you waiting so long , but our project manager has been very, very busy. Today you'll get the price for the stand design B that we sent .
- Pretty good, actually.
- I suggest: Sorry for keeping you waiting so long , but our project manager has been very, very busy.
- Today you'll get the price for the stand design B that we sent .
- I would also like to ask you which other fairs you will be taking part in: we can offer you a better price if you are able to enter into a minimum three-year contract with us.
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Pretty good, actually. I suggest:
Sorry for keeping you waiting so long, but our project manager has been very, very busy. Today you'll get the price for the stand design B that we sent. I would also like to ask you which other fairs you will be taking part in: we can offer you a better price if you are able to enter into a minimum three-yea
Sorry for keeping you waiting so long, but our project manager has been very, very busy. Today you'll get the price for the stand design B that we sent. I would also like to ask you which other fairs you will be taking part in: we can offer you a better price if you are able to enter into a minimum three-yea
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Hi,
thanks for giving me a better option! Actually I was sure that my sentence was bad at all! I have few questions for you please:
- Does "IN" always follow the verb "to take part" ? I though "to"
- I haven´t hear the verb "to enter into" referred to a contract, is it wrong to say "to sign a contract"?
Thanks
PAMELA
thanks for giving me a better option! Actually I was sure that my sentence was bad at all! I have few questions for you please:
- Does "IN" always follow the verb "to take part" ? I though "to"
- I haven´t hear the verb "to enter into" referred to a contract, is it wrong to say "to sign a contract"?
Thanks
PAMELA
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Does "IN" always follow the verb "to take part" ?- Yes, always 'in' + object.
I haven´t hear the verb "to enter into" referred to a contract, is it wrong to say "to sign a contract"?-- Not wrong, but it is too demanding to ask someone to sign unless both parties have already agreed to a contract and have actually reached the signing stage. 'Enter into' a contract' (and noti
I haven´t hear the verb "to enter into" referred to a contract, is it wrong to say "to sign a contract"?-- Not wrong, but it is too demanding to ask someone to sign unless both parties have already agreed to a contract and have actually reached the signing stage. 'Enter into' a contract' (and noti
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