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00 Finally, an overview of the immigrant families that redefine themselves in 01 02 00 , and the growing gap with the traditional Peruvian family in the home country, which is created by the exposure to a different culture, is given. Further, changes in the family members’ roles caused principally by different levels of acculturation and gender present within the Peruvian families is explained. The levels of acculturation on immigrant families and its influence on the younger members, that affect their vision of the future, tendencies and preferences, are also discussed. 02 br
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00 Finally, an overview of the immigrant families that redefine themselves in 01 02 00 , and the growing gap with the traditional Peruvian family in the home country, which is created by the exposure to a different culture, is given. Further, changes in the family members’ roles caused principally by different levels of acculturation and gender present within the Peruvian families is explained. The levels of acculturation on immigrant families and its influence on the younger members, that affect their vision of the future, tendencies and preferences, are also discussed. 02 br
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02 br 02 br 00 You should rephrase/clarify that sentence, IMO. "Gender" is dangerously dangling there 05 0 010id 1
- 02 br 02 br 00 You should rephrase/clarify that sentence, IMO.
- "Gender" is dangerously dangling there 05 0 010id 1
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01 i 00 Further, changes in the family members’ roles caused principally by different lev
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