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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Legal Studies
I just need this to finish my monograph...
I have to write a abstract in english ......i wrote this paragraph....what do you think about it? i have to change anything?? thanks for your help! guto1105
The present work intends to demonstrate in substantial way the structure it external control in Brazil, reflected for the Courts of Accounts, that much even so are not of free knowledge, represents the maximum expression of the basic rights and the democracy in the country, a time that fits to the cited Cuts the public fiscalization of the goods and values, hindering that it has wastefulnesses or improper advantages gained by the Collators of expenditures. Thus, to the long one of the work it will be developed the history of the Courts of Accounts and its evolution to the long one of the years, as well as its abilities and attributions, in order to consecrate the structure that consolidated the democracy and the application of the basic rights.
The present work intends to demonstrate in substantial way the structure it external control in Brazil, reflected for the Courts of Accounts, that much even so are not of free knowledge, represents the maximum expression of the basic rights and the democracy in the country, a time that fits to the cited Cuts the public fiscalization of the goods and values, hindering that it has wastefulnesses or improper advantages gained by the Collators of expenditures. Thus, to the long one of the work it will be developed the history of the Courts of Accounts and its evolution to the long one of the years, as well as its abilities and attributions, in order to consecrate the structure that consolidated the democracy and the application of the basic rights.
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Yes, you need to change a lot of things. This abstract is very hard to read and contains a lot of mistakes. Try to shorten the sentences, too.
- Yes, you need to change a lot of things.
- This abstract is very hard to read and contains a lot of mistakes.
- Try to shorten the sentences, too.
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Yes, you need to change a lot of things. This abstract is very hard to read and contains a lot of mistakes. Try to shorten the sentences, too.
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