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Ritinha Posted 21 years ago
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I hope ...

Could you please correct this sentence for me ...

I hope to continue delivering my work with the level of quality that the division deserves and contributing for the achievement of its strategic objects.

Thanks in advance,
Ritinha
  

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)" You only minor errors, good job! "strategic objects" didn't make much sense, if you mean the "strategic goals" than "objectives" is the proper word.

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  • )" You only minor errors, good job!
  • "strategic objects" didn't make much sense, if you mean the "strategic goals" than "objectives" is the proper word.
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"I hope to continue delivering my work with the level of quality that the divison deserves and to contribute to the achievement of its strategic (objectives?)"

You only minor errors, good job!

"strategic objects" didn't make much sense, if you mean the "strategic goals" than "objectives" is the proper word.
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