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Forlan Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

I heard story

Hi,
Do you understand this paragraph?

I heard my friend's story who had wanted to resign from job. His boss impeded and given higher salary. Finally, he has been working until today.
  

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Hi, Yes, I do. But it is not written in correct English. Clive

  • Hi, Yes, I do.
  • But it is not written in correct English.
  • Clive
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Hi,



Yes, I do.



But it is not written in correct English.



Clive
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Actually, I don't understand the last sentence. Did he quit anyway?
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no, he stills works at there.
Please correct my sentence
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It would have been better if you constructed the sentence this way:

I heard the story about my friend who wanted to resign from his job. His boss did not accept his resignation and gave him a salary increase instead. And he still works there until now.

The noun clause "who wanted to resign from his job" modifies your friend, not the story. So "friend" should be placed right

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