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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
I have written motivation letter but am not satisfied with it
Could you please give me comments on it. Ill post the question and then my motivation letter-answer. I will utterly appreciate your support.
Motivation. Outline your motivation for choosing the IMRCEES programme (i.e. how it complements and develops your previous studies; how it relates to your career path; how it relates to your personal and academic interests).
Recently I couldn’t even dream about program which combines all such necessary and appropriate courses for my personal and professional development as **** program does.
First of all is it held in one of the best Universities in world and UK. It gives me opportunity to be plunged in new culture and new ideology of doing business as well as political governing I am very impressed in. The ideology which post-soviet countries should inherit and implement. And it is one of the reasons I am motivated by.
Secondly, even though I wasn’t studying politics in university, I am participant of Diplomatic organization which attends and discuss in appropriate diplomatic environment the most important governing, socio and economical problems of different countries. InUkrainianUniversityI have studied something more then just a set of organized information. I have studied communication and collaboration with people of different ages, responsibility for work/projects I was doing, persistence and diligence and, of course, universal knowledge of management that could be applicable to all spheres of business. But the courses which will be held inGlasgowUniversityand The Jagiellonian University are those I am utterly interested in due to my personal and future professional interests.
Thirdly, One of The best opportunity ***** program provides is to combine education with practice, to do field work, researches as well as summer work in country where I see my future and want develop –*****.
In conclusion I want one more time emphacise that this program seems to be created specially form me in a way it is constructed and area it is held in.
One more time, tmx for help!!!!
Motivation. Outline your motivation for choosing the IMRCEES programme (i.e. how it complements and develops your previous studies; how it relates to your career path; how it relates to your personal and academic interests).
Recently I couldn’t even dream about program which combines all such necessary and appropriate courses for my personal and professional development as **** program does.
First of all is it held in one of the best Universities in world and UK. It gives me opportunity to be plunged in new culture and new ideology of doing business as well as political governing I am very impressed in. The ideology which post-soviet countries should inherit and implement. And it is one of the reasons I am motivated by.
Secondly, even though I wasn’t studying politics in university, I am participant of Diplomatic organization which attends and discuss in appropriate diplomatic environment the most important governing, socio and economical problems of different countries. InUkrainianUniversityI have studied something more then just a set of organized information. I have studied communication and collaboration with people of different ages, responsibility for work/projects I was doing, persistence and diligence and, of course, universal knowledge of management that could be applicable to all spheres of business. But the courses which will be held inGlasgowUniversityand The Jagiellonian University are those I am utterly interested in due to my personal and future professional interests.
Thirdly, One of The best opportunity ***** program provides is to combine education with practice, to do field work, researches as well as summer work in country where I see my future and want develop –*****.
In conclusion I want one more time emphacise that this program seems to be created specially form me in a way it is constructed and area it is held in.
One more time, tmx for help!!!!
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