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Koanh1124 Posted 5 years ago
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I have written a task 1 passage and I really you can help me with it. Thanks a lot.

The table compares the percentage of people whose age is 65 and above in three countries: Canada, Germany and UK in three specific years: 1988, 2000 and 2030.

Overall, the population of elderly is predicted to rise in all three countries from 1998 to 2030. The highest percentage of older people was in Germany which continues to remain in 2030 while the lowest proportion can be seen in the UK over the period given.

In 1998, German aged 65 plus was 20.45 %, followed by Canadian with 16.32 %. Both then rose slightly by around 5 % to reach 25.32% and 20.67% in 2000 , respectively. On the other hand, the UK showed a relatively little increase by 0.6 %.

In 2030, it is predicted that the older people of all three countries continue going up by approxiamtely 5.5 %. The figure is forecasted to be 30.42% in Germany, 26.35 % in Canada and 20.35 % in UK.

  

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It is my excercise.

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my exercise is here.

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You write a lot of unnecessary phrases, so the text is highly repetitious. Do not insert a space between a number and the percent sign.


The table compares the percentage of people aged whose age is 65 and above in three countries: Canada, Germany and UK in three specific years: 1988, 2000 and 2030.

Overall, the populat

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