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Jazzzy Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing

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Write a letter to your Municipal Corporation in about 300 words Complaining about the state of roads of your area and lack of street light here.

17- B Sadar

18-September-2017

To,

The A.k Gupta

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is write to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of our locality. Sector 125 to Sector 137 the Stretch has been very poor Condition since last six months.This road is one of the busiest road in new Delhi.

The onset of Monsoon has only worsen the situation. There are huge Potholes on this road.Almost every other day vehicles is punctured or dented or gets stuck. Everyday citizens have to tolerate huge Traffic Jams and in the night situation is getting worse due to lack of street light.

Further, It is very difficult to pedestrian to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrian tend to walk because lack of footpath.

These conditions caused a lot of inconvenienced to the residents of this are as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will intimate expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you

Your faithfully

Jazzy.


  

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  • Then we can work on the rest of it.
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Jazzy;

Please correct the highlighted errors in the first part of your letter. Then we can work on the rest of it.



17- B Sadar ( What is this?)

18-September-2017 (Dates have no hyphens.)

To,

The A.k Gupta

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corp

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