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Guto1105 Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

I have to write a letter to a buyer

Hi,

I´m new here and i would like to help me. I try to export my products, and i´ve found out some contacts, in a business page. I need to make the first contact with them, so i need to introduce my company and show my products.

I´ve made a letter that i would like to show you and advice if i have to change anything.

Dear xxxxx,

I would like to offer our products. We are a brazilian company, that made articles to bed, table and bath. (i don´t know if it is correctly?), sheets, towels and tablecloths. We have a complete line for the bed, consisting of percale 100% cotton or mixed sheets and pillowcase, besides eiderdowns, kits and bedspreads. We also have stamping tablecothes, consisting of 50% cotton and 50% polyester.The sizes will be according to your needs. The personalization can be done by manual stamping (??) (it isn´t machine) or embroidery.

i´m looking forward to explain you any of information that you need about our collection.

Augusto

ps. The picture of our products are in the attachments.

  

Top answer

Hi, I've made a few corrections but I'm not sure about the parts in pink. Eiderdowns are thick padded covers containing feathers that you use with traditional sheets and blankets and they do not have their own loose cover. I wonder if perhaps you make duvets?

  • Hi, I've made a few corrections but I'm not sure about the parts in pink.
  • Eiderdowns are thick padded covers containing feathers that you use with traditional sheets and blankets and they do not have their own loose cover.
  • I wonder if perhaps you make duvets?
  • These are more modern and are thick padded covers (either feather or artificial stuffing) that completely replace the top sheets and blankets, and have washable loose covers.
  • I also wonder if your 'kits' are duvet covers or bedding sets?
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Hi,

I've made a few corrections but I'm not sure about the parts in pink. Eiderdowns are thick padded covers containing feathers that you use with traditional sheets and blankets and they do not have their own loose cover. I wonder if perhaps you make duvets? These are more modern and are thick padded covers (either feather or artificial stuffing) that completely replace the top sheets a
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Thanks for your help.

I´ve changed a little bit with your advise, but i still with some question. i´ve attached some photos about my products, because i don´t know the right word to express our tecnology. Could be serigraph??. If you could help me, i will be grateful! And what-s llinens?? is it linens?? but this is not a kind of textile? we work also with cotton, and mixed textile.

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