I have to write a English letter...

Hello,

Firstly I want to tell you I'm from the Netherlands.

On school we have to learn English.

Because my English isn't the best; I wanted to look for a English forum to increase my English.

Yesterday I got the task to write a letter in English.
I have done it; but I want to know if it's correct English.

If you want to check it for me; I will be happy!

I'm not a hit-and-run person; I want to stay on this forum. :-)

If this isn't the meaning of this forum; please say it to me and I will looking for another forum.

My English (very) bad.

Here is my letter:

Embassy of the United States of America
Attn. Mr R. E. Arnall
Lange Voorhout 102
2514 EJ The Hague
The Netherlands

Dear sir,

My name is Lennard. I'm nearly sixteen years old. I live in Ter Aar, a little village lies in The Netherlands. I'm in the fourth form.

I have read the story of a Senegalese high school student who was left by his mother in 2002 when he was 14 years old.

I think it´s very clever to go to school without parents, and even win a price with a robot.

But maybe he will be sent back to Senegal. It's a pity that he becomes eightteen years old; when he was still a young, he had more chances to stay in the United States of America.

I would like to help Amadou because the whole story about him touches me and I want to help him to stay in the United States of America: Every little helps...

Futhermore I am happy to tell you that I collected very much signatures of students and teachers from my school (I suppose it are more than thousend pieces!).

I attach the petition in the hope that this will work and that you can reach something with the signatures.

Yours faithfully,

Lennard.


If you want to correct it; I would like to stay on this forum.

Ow; Another question; where can I register me?