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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

I have question.

Hi,

The task is :
Think of all the possible causes and effects of the following situations.
5.Nowadays,young people read less than in the past.Therefore,
a.Most young people haven't good spelling and sentence structure.
b.They don't learn more interesting things . ( I need write "interesting" or "interested" and when i used with two ).
c.They haven't good vocabulary.

This is my answers and I need someone check me that and repair the mistakes.

Thanks .
  

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" "They don't learn _many interesting things" -- I think you should be more specific here. Why don't they? Maybe, because TV and PC offer a lot of useless (and often harmful) entartainment; and browsing web or watching a TV show imposes less work on our brains and is therefore easier and more pleasing and indulging to our worst desires?

  • " "They don't learn _many interesting things" -- I think you should be more specific here.
  • Why don't they?
  • Maybe, because TV and PC offer a lot of useless (and often harmful) entartainment; and browsing web or watching a TV show imposes less work on our brains and is therefore easier and more pleasing and indulging to our worst desires?
  • "They don't have _a_ good vocabulary" or, not to repreat the structure of the forst sentence, -- "Their vocabulary is poor" And you haven't provided any causes of such a desparate a situation!
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  "The majority of young people don't have  a_  good  (writing)    style."      "They don't learn _many interesting things" --  I  think  you    should be more specific here. Why don't they?  Maybe,  because    TV  and  PC  offer  a  lot  of  useless  (and  often  harmful)    entartainment; and browsing web or watching a TV show  imposes    less work on our brains  and  is  therefore 
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thanks ,
I don't understand the first sentence may you write it again ?
I can say instead sentence two :
They don't improve their language.
second possibility :
The children don't enter the magic world of the books.

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