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BaCkoHTe Posted 13 years ago
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I have problem with writing formal letter
Hello everyone! I am student from Bulgaria. I and my classmate having a homework to write a formal letter to intoduce ourself to my new boss in U.S. I must ask him some questions, so i made this letter ( at the bottom of the topick ), but I don't think is absolutely right. Can you read it and correct me where I am wrong. Thank you in advance.
P.S. - Sorry for my English
Dear Mr.___,
We are writing to inform you that we will be working for you this summer. We are students from Ruse, Bulgaria.
We would like to thank you for this great opportunity and to express our impatience on spending the summer working in Keystone, South Dakota. Also, we have some queries about pick - up from the nearest airport, the housing and the job.
First of all, we would like to know did you arrange pick - up from the nearest airport and what kind of information you would need to know about our flight (flight number, arrival time and atc.).
Second of all, could you please inform us, did we have to bring something with us, like utilities, lines or something else. Also, we would like to know, did we have to make deposit, about/for the housing?
Finally, we would like to ask, is there any requirements about the clothes, we should have to wear during our workdays (shirts, jeans / pants and shoes)?
Thank you in advance for your reply. We are really looking forward to the summer.
Yours sincerely,
First student, Second student
P.S. - Sorry for my English
Dear Mr.___,
We are writing to inform you that we will be working for you this summer. We are students from Ruse, Bulgaria.
We would like to thank you for this great opportunity and to express our impatience on spending the summer working in Keystone, South Dakota. Also, we have some queries about pick - up from the nearest airport, the housing and the job.
First of all, we would like to know did you arrange pick - up from the nearest airport and what kind of information you would need to know about our flight (flight number, arrival time and atc.).
Second of all, could you please inform us, did we have to bring something with us, like utilities, lines or something else. Also, we would like to know, did we have to make deposit, about/for the housing?
Finally, we would like to ask, is there any requirements about the clothes, we should have to wear during our workdays (shirts, jeans / pants and shoes)?
Thank you in advance for your reply. We are really looking forward to the summer.
Yours sincerely,
First student, Second student
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___, We are writing to inform you that we will be working for you this summer. We are students from Ruse, Bulgaria. ) on spending for allowing us to spend the summer working in Keystone, South Dakota.
- ___, We are writing to inform you that we will be working for you this summer.
- We are students from Ruse, Bulgaria.
- ) on spending for allowing us to spend the summer working in Keystone, South Dakota.
- Also, we have some queries about pick-up f rom the nearest airport, the housing and the job.
- arrangement for pick-up from the airport, housing, and job descriptions.
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Dear Mr.___,
We are writing to inform you that we will be working for you this summer. We are students from Ruse, Bulgaria.
We would like to thank you for this great opportunity and to express our impatience (the word impatience is use incorrectly--I don't know if you mean gratitude
We are writing to inform you that we will be working for you this summer. We are students from Ruse, Bulgaria.
We would like to thank you for this great opportunity and to express our impatience (the word impatience is use incorrectly--I don't know if you mean gratitude
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