I have posted this essay before but i don't recieve any feedback. Hope you can review my essay and thanks for your help

Traanf THU But there are some sample answers on the Internet that have the same template as mine.

Are you copying other people's essays?

By the way, there are dozens of "prestigious" teachers with web sites. I have read many of them. I have watched many of their videos. They do not give the same advice. Some say, "Do this!" And others say, "Don't do this." And others say, "Maybe do this."

If I give advice, it is because I have good sound reasons for it.

I believe that if there is a task for an exam, and the task has instructions with questions, the most critical thing a student needs to do is to follow the instructions and answer the questions. Do you think it is a good policy not to answer the questions on an exam, but answer some different questions that you make up?

Anyway, if you have a favorite prestigious teacher that has a different idea, then you should write to them and ask them to give you feedback.