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BeginStudent Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

I have oral speaking tommrow , I don't know if grammaer is correct

HI,

My name is moshe,surename is benitach .

I live in kiriat gat and I am 18 yearsd old.

I have two brothers and no sister.

Also I am oldest chin in the family.My father is an electronics and electricty enginer , I wish I would like him in university. My mother is a housekeeper.

I have been studying at rogozin for seven yeas.

I want to study an software enginer during my military service and serve in my occupation for servral years after I have finish degree.Not speciall realtion for the oldest child.My brother and I is equall for my parents.I don't have much spare time but when I do usually sped it watching TV,playing computer and hanging out with my friends.I have a hobby it's computer programming and games.I have never been abroad while my father was being in paris before I born.

I will happy if you check my grammar and need to speech it for my bagrut examination tommorow.

Thanks Alot friends.

I wiil happy if you have some tips .
  

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Hello, Here is your document with corrections. Thanks! Andrew Lawton <<advertising link removed>> HI, My name is moshe, my surename is benitach .

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  • Hello, Here is your document with corrections.
  • Thanks!
  • Andrew Lawton <<advertising link removed>> HI, My name is moshe, my surename is benitach .
  • I live in kiriat gat and I am 18 years old.
  • I have two brothers and no sisters.
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Hello,

Here is your document with corrections. Thanks!

Andrew Lawton
<<advertising link removed>>

HI,

My name is moshe, my surename is benitach .

I live in kiriat gat and I am 18 years old.

I have two brothers and no sisters.

Also, I am the oldest child in the fa
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