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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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I have just joined the company and need to introduce myself over the phone to the new colleague

Hi! Everybody! Do you think below introduction is good enough to introduce myself to my colleague over the phone whose I never meet before?

Hi! I am John. I am very glad to know all of you over the phone. I have joined our company since the beginning of this month. My position is XXX Manager. In future, if there have anything which I can help, please don't hesistate to let me know. Thanks a lot.
  

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Hello anonymous, please consider following revision of mine : Your original paragraph: Hi! I am John. I am very glad to know all of you over the phone.

— Julianto Makmur

  • Hello anonymous, please consider following revision of mine : Your original paragraph: Hi!
  • I am John.
  • I am very glad to know all of you over the phone.
  • I have joined our company since the beginning of this month.
  • My position is *** Manager.
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Hello anonymous, please consider following revision of mine :

Your original paragraph:

Hi! I am John. I am very glad to know all of you over the phone. I have joined our company since the beginning of this month. My position is *** Manager. In future, if there have anything which I can help, please don't hesistate to let me know. Thanks a lot.

My suggestion:

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Thank you so much for your reply.

I will base on your revised version to talk my colleague today.

Thank a lot.
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Hi!

You could also consider this. Emotion: smile

Hi! I'm John. I'm very glad to get to know all of you. (I don't think you need
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Hi!

I noted your suggestion.

Thank you so much for your suggestion.
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Your original paragraph:

Hi! I am John. I am very glad to know all of you over the phone. I have joined our company since the beginning of this month. My position is *** Manager. In future, if there have anything which I can help, please don't hesistate to let me know. Thanks a lot.

Better (more native) English would be:

Hi! My name's John, I joined the company early this

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