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XHealthY Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I have finals in 05/11/2009

I am suppose to write an essay about why I like my life right now, or why I dislike about my life right now.

She said I can write about why I like about my life and why I dislike about my life.

But I don't get it! Do I need to write, for instance,

I like my life because I have a nice family. Thus, I hang out with them every weekends. We have a lot of fun.

It is something like that?

I dislike my life right now because I'm lonely. I have no friends to be with. ..............
  

Top answer

Hi, These all sound like good ideas to write about. Clive

  • Hi, These all sound like good ideas to write about.
  • Clive
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Hi,

These all sound like good ideas to write about.

Clive
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Thank you! Wish me a luck! haha Emotion: smile
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So, I can't write about the past nor in the future?

^ Is my grammar okay there? Emotion: big smile
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Hi,

You're supposed to write about right now.

Clive
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I suppose to write three paragraph

Paragraph #1 - Why I like my family or families?

Paragraph #2 - Why I like my neighborhood?
Paragraph #3 - Why I dislike my job?

Should I write about these?
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Hi,

Sure, go ahead and write.

Clive
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How's my grammar for this-

I work on a night shift, It's an overtime job which I don't like it, because I can't spend more time with my family. I normally work at 3:30 pm to 12:00 pm a day. And it's difficult for me to study! Because of my job, I only sleep 3-4 hours before I go to college.
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Hi,

Pretty good. Here are a few edits.

I work on a night shift. I don't like it, because I can't spend more time with my family. I normally work from 3:30 pm to 12:00 pm daily. And it's difficult for me to study! Because of my job, I only sleep 3-4 hours before I go to college.

Best wishes, Clive

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