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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
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I have chosen to talk about Ilan Ramon , I need some advices.
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00 I want some advices how to says the maining sentences for this reason that I have chosen ilan ramon. 02 br
00 I have chosen Ilan Ramon because 01 b 01 i 00 he was a first israeli astrounout and he donated alot to isreal's militay. 02 br
02 i 02 b 00 For this reason I need to explain in my speech , how cay I get the introduction , body ,conclusion in this information : 05 0 02 br
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00 Thank very much. 0240href http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ilan_Ramon#NASA_experience
00 I want some advices how to says the maining sentences for this reason that I have chosen ilan ramon. 02 br
00 I have chosen Ilan Ramon because 01 b 01 i 00 he was a first israeli astrounout and he donated alot to isreal's militay. 02 br
02 i 02 b 00 For this reason I need to explain in my speech , how cay I get the introduction , body ,conclusion in this information : 05 0 02 br
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00 Thank very much. 0240href http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ilan_Ramon#NASA_experience
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02 i 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 "Donated" suggests that he gave money or equipment, which I don't think is what you mean, so I changed it to "contributed". " 0-
- 02 i 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 "Donated" suggests that he gave money or equipment, which I don't think is what you mean, so I changed it to "contributed".
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0 The part that you've written in bold text should be like this: 02 br
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01 b 01 i 00 he was the first Israeli astronaut and he contributed a lot to Israel's military. 02 i 02 b 02 br
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00 "Donated" suggests that he gave money or equipment, which I don't think is what you mean, so I changed it to "contributed". 02 br
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01 b 01 i 00 he was the first Israeli astronaut and he contributed a lot to Israel's military. 02 i 02 b 02 br
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00 "Donated" suggests that he gave money or equipment, which I don't think is what you mean, so I changed it to "contributed". 02 br
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0 Thanks , 02 br
00 What Can I make me paper for speech. 02 br
00 I need the introduction and body , who can help me to make one paper from the interent(I gave url site in first message) , I need it to improve to my teacher my english , I have to succeed , please help me. 02 br
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00 What Can I make me paper for speech. 02 br
00 I need the introduction and body , who can help me to make one paper from the interent(I gave url site in first message) , I need it to improve to my teacher my english , I have to succeed , please help me. 02 br
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0 If you have any specific questions about using English then I'd be happy to try to help (along with lots of other people here, of course). 02 br
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00 But your request above is too vague -- I don't know what you want me to do, short of writing the paper myself, which is not going to help you improve your English. 0-
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00 But your request above is too vague -- I don't know what you want me to do, short of writing the paper myself, which is not going to help you improve your English. 0-
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0 o.k,I have question about my project "Heroin": 02 br
00 I need to read it from my teacher without see in my project. 02 br
00 Something have idea how can I begin with it . 02 br
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00 Thanks I needs it tomorrow. 0-
00 I need to read it from my teacher without see in my project. 02 br
00 Something have idea how can I begin with it . 02 br
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00 Thanks I needs it tomorrow. 0-
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