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Cso.huang Posted 19 years ago
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I have a article about recent Chinese stock market, pls check
pls check the below sentence and tell me what mistake I made...
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After one week of stumbling, the stock market begin to come back to rise. Concerning to the decline of last week, analysts said, it was caused by those worried that some kinds of conjuncture would happen but which not happen, and had no any relationship with the fundamentals.
Despite of raising interest rates by central bank and taking out money from market by China Oil, the stock market did not get any dent from raising.
Before 15th.Otc, we are all considering that the market will be raise more cause of Large-Caps Blue-Chip companies, but, after CSRC(China Security Regulatory Commission) emphasized the self-education of investors last week, the qualm extended throughout the market and local investors began to sold out stocks.
SHANGHAI COMPOSITE INDEX fell by more than 600 points. But, it made the chance to the mutual fund and institutional investors to enter the stock market. They could buy shares at the comparatively low price. As the financing report of 3Q will release recently, I believe the stock market will be raise more and more higher.
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After one week of stumbling, the stock market begin to come back to rise. Concerning to the decline of last week, analysts said, it was caused by those worried that some kinds of conjuncture would happen but which not happen, and had no any relationship with the fundamentals.
Despite of raising interest rates by central bank and taking out money from market by China Oil, the stock market did not get any dent from raising.
Before 15th.Otc, we are all considering that the market will be raise more cause of Large-Caps Blue-Chip companies, but, after CSRC(China Security Regulatory Commission) emphasized the self-education of investors last week, the qualm extended throughout the market and local investors began to sold out stocks.
SHANGHAI COMPOSITE INDEX fell by more than 600 points. But, it made the chance to the mutual fund and institutional investors to enter the stock market. They could buy shares at the comparatively low price. As the financing report of 3Q will release recently, I believe the stock market will be raise more and more higher.
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huang, I take it that you are in tune with the stock market I think most visitors on this fourm are not very interested in threads regarding finance. I am going to take a shot at your post and give it a financial spin, my way. After a week of decline, the market begins to show signs of rebound.
- huang, I take it that you are in tune with the stock market I think most visitors on this fourm are not very interested in threads regarding finance.
- I am going to take a shot at your post and give it a financial spin, my way.
- After a week of decline, the market begins to show signs of rebound.
- Market analysts believed the last week’s decline was triggered by anticipated worries over events which did not materialize and has no connection to the market fundamentals.
- Despite rate hike by The Central Bank and China Oil’s move to retreat it's position from the market, the market spirit is seemingly still untouched and rebounding from last weeks retreat.
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Hi Cso.huang,
I take it that you are in tune with the stock market I think most visitors on this fourm are not very interested in threads regarding finance. I am going to take a shot at your post and give it a financial spin, my way.
I take it that you are in tune with the stock market I think most visitors on this fourm are not very interested in threads regarding finance. I am going to take a shot at your post and give it a financial spin, my way.
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