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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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I have 3 sentence I need to correct.

I have 3 sentence I need to correct. It is about massaging.

+ The best part of the body to be massaged in the thigh. You could lose a couple of thigh sizes if you massage the area. You get rid of the cellulite.

+ This thigh feels so much better when massaged than the other one. There is more sensation in this one.

+ I would never look to see if people had nice hands before I worked in cosmetics.

I appreciate the help
  

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You can/will get rid of the cellulite. This thigh will feel so much better than the other thigh when it is massaged. (you can leave this sentence out ''There is more sensation in this one'' because maybe it sounds a bit weird (but that's just my opinion).

  • You can/will get rid of the cellulite.
  • This thigh will feel so much better than the other thigh when it is massaged.
  • (you can leave this sentence out ''There is more sensation in this one'' because maybe it sounds a bit weird (but that's just my opinion).
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You can/will get rid of the cellulite.
This thigh will feel so much better than the other thigh when it is massaged.
(you can leave this sentence out ''There is more sensation in this one'' because maybe it sounds a bit weird (but that's just my opinion).

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