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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

I formulated these sentences. Are they grammatically okay?

I formulated these sentences. Are they grammatically okay? Thank you.

For sure, any act of terror, in whatever form, is a criminal act. Why? For it endangers people’s freedom, rights, security, and lives. Who wants to live in this world with fear after all? It is but human nature to desire peace and order, isn’t it?
  

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Unfortunately, I can name a long list of acts of terror that were legal, if only de facto, in the history of my country. And judging by human history, we care more for war than peace and order. "

  • Unfortunately, I can name a long list of acts of terror that were legal, if only de facto, in the history of my country.
  • And judging by human history, we care more for war than peace and order.
  • "
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Unfortunately, I can name a long list of acts of terror that were legal, if only de facto, in the history of my country. And judging by human history, we care more for war than peace and order.

That said, the good news is that your grammar is fine, modulo the subsequent discussion of "after all."

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