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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
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I don't know if my sentence is right.
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01 font 00 <We should not make the youngsters grinds but endeavor to train them to have great visions of a peaceful and progressive world.> 02 font 02 br
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00 I made this sentence using 'not A but B'. 02 br
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01 font 00 'We should not drive the youngsters to being grinds( those who study only). Instead, we have to endeavour to train them to have great visons of a peaceful and progressive world.' 02 font 02 br
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00 Please check my sentence. 02 br
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00 I don't have to use 'not A but B' and it's ok the sentence is divided into 2 sentences. 0-
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01 font 00 <We should not make the youngsters grinds but endeavor to train them to have great visions of a peaceful and progressive world.> 02 font 02 br
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00 I made this sentence using 'not A but B'. 02 br
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01 font 00 'We should not drive the youngsters to being grinds( those who study only). Instead, we have to endeavour to train them to have great visons of a peaceful and progressive world.' 02 font 02 br
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00 Please check my sentence. 02 br
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00 I don't have to use 'not A but B' and it's ok the sentence is divided into 2 sentences. 0-
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02 br 02 br 02 font 00 But as far as vocab I have two things: 02 br 02 br 00 youngsters - Typically used by the elderly or in a satirical manner. 02 br 02 br 00 grind - I'm not sure what you meant by this one. The way I wrote it makes gramatical sense, but I'm not exactly sure what you mean by grind in this context.
- 02 br 02 br 02 font 00 But as far as vocab I have two things: 02 br 02 br 00 youngsters - Typically used by the elderly or in a satirical manner.
- 02 br 02 br 00 grind - I'm not sure what you meant by this one.
- The way I wrote it makes gramatical sense, but I'm not exactly sure what you mean by grind in this context.
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0 Lets see, the vocabulary choice is a little strange, but gramatically I think it should read like this: 02 br
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01 font 00 We should not make the youngsters grind; we should endeavor to give a vision of a peaceful and progressive world. 02 br
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02 font 00 But as far as vocab I have two things: 02 br
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01 font 00 We should not make the youngsters grind; we should endeavor to give a vision of a peaceful and progressive world. 02 br
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0 Thankk you, Asell. 02 br
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00 Your answer helps me a lot. 05 0 02 br
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00 I don't know which word to choose to express people who studies like a machine without good visions. 010id 2
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00 Your answer helps me a lot. 05 0 02 br
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00 I don't know which word to choose to express people who studies like a machine without good visions. 010id 2
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