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Teal lime Posted 5 years ago
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I do spinning.....

Would you please improve the following sentence?

1) I do spinning (indoor cycling) for nearly an hour every afternoon.

Thank you.

  

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teal lime Would you please improve the following sentence? 1) I do spinning (indoor cycling) for nearly an hour every afternoon. Thank you.

— CalifJim

  • teal lime Would you please improve the following sentence?
  • 1) I do spinning (indoor cycling) for nearly an hour every afternoon.
  • Thank you.
  • I don't think it needs improvement.
  • ", avoiding the use of a parenthetical expression, but what you have is OK.
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teal lime

Would you please improve the following sentence?

1) I do spinning (indoor cycling) for nearly an hour every afternoon.

Thank you.

I don't think it needs improvement.

I would have written "I do indoor cycling for ...", avoiding the use of a parenthetical expression, but what you have is OK.

CJ

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