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Mellavere Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I can't think how to make a thesis with this short essay.

Please help, I can't make up a thesis about "Money" topic.?

can anyone help me with the thesis and conslusion, and maybe any suggestion that I could or delete.


The bible says that "The love of money is root of all evil" (timothy 6:10)
This is immediately brings to mind that money is not the problem is the personal perception that cause of the problem. People perceive money in many different ways, such as some people are big spenders, money freely flows to and from their hand and spend without regard to the actual money that they are spending. Some people are what we call frugal, these people spend when necessary and try to be practical and how they use their money. Finally there’s what we called tightwad, these are the people who are afraid to spend because if they do spend they have the sensation that they will be without money in the future and thus they do not dare spend even a penny unless absolutely necessary.

Everyone perceives money in different ways.
  

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If you want to elaborate on the quote, you can easily cook something up, such as: Since money had been widely utilized, the **** for money has always been abundant. ", therefore there has been an assumption that having money is equal to having power. You can say that money is a representative of social status , money is a "gift in disguise" from the devil (it has given us much convenience and much trouble), money is mostly the reason one steals or dies for, .......

  • If you want to elaborate on the quote, you can easily cook something up, such as: Since money had been widely utilized, the **** for money has always been abundant.
  • ", therefore there has been an assumption that having money is equal to having power.
  • You can say that money is a representative of social status , money is a "gift in disguise" from the devil (it has given us much convenience and much trouble), money is mostly the reason one steals or dies for, .......
  • Sorry if I am not of any help, but I have tried my best.
  • Good luck and hope you get a good grade on the thesis.
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If you want to elaborate on the quote, you can easily cook something up, such as:

Since money had been widely utilized, the **** for money has always been abundant. In the ancient times, it is like "He who has money has power......", therefore there has been an assumption that having money is equal to having power. ...................

You can say that money is a representative o
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Here is the final of my essay. Tell me what do you think, and dont be afraid suggest, or correct me. I am new to essay so I accept whatever you think. Below is my rough draft. "Money".

The bible says, "The love of money is root of all evil." (Timothy 6:10)
Money is not the problem is the personal perception that cause of the problem. It is just an object, a currency for trade. Al
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Hi,

An essay should consist of a number of paragraphs. The following are standard.

An introductory paragraph, in which you explain riefly what your tiopic is, what you will be discussing.

One or more paragraphs that discuss various aspects of your topic.

A paragraph that concludes your essay.

So, you need to break what you have written into at least thr

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