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00One year ago when I was studying in the collage . l was living with my friends in the hostel . Living in the hostel was really difficult because we did not have a house maid as in our houses . So we had to do every thing our selves . The worst thing for us was cooking . When we feel hungry just we call the restaurant by phone and ask them to bring us fast foods . We where eating fast foods as a basic meals during the four years of our studying . Fast foods are the worst food i ever ate . Now i have finished my studying and i began working as a teacher in my region . When my brother or my father brings fast foods at home i really feel sick . In my opinion fast foods with all its kinds such as humberger, sandwiches and hotdogs are very disgusting.[/size] 0-
  

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0 I experienced the worst food ever one year ago when I was studying in college . l was living with my friends in the hostel and it was really difficult because we did not have a house maid as we were used to, so we had to do everything by ourselves . It turned out that the worst thing for us was cooking. When we felt hungry we took the habit of ordering fast food and we quickly found ourselve

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