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The concept of progress makes it possible for people to improve their economy that enhances people’s standard of living. As is known, the developments of human being’s economy encompass several phases such as agriculture industry, modern society. Because of people endeavoring to create more effective process of production, people gradually have ability to elevate standard of living from undeveloped society to developed society. This situation not only helps people get out of poverty but also enable people to enjoy wealthy life. The more progress people reach it easier for people to enrich their standard of living.

The advancement of technology makes it possible for people to make their life convenient. For one thing, the internet creates a virtual library in which people can gain more information. Because Internet has features of hyperlink, hypertext, and database, most of the students acquire and broaden knowledge more quick than in the past. For another, it is email that shifts the way of communication among people. In other words, people will be able to use this kind of communication to reach any place at any time from anywhere. It might help people realize the dream of global village where people can contact their friends living in the remotest corners of the world without any block. Without this progress, there would be no change and improvement in people’s life.