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Odessa Dawn Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
I am writing you to express ...
I am writing you to express my warmest thanks for what you have done to make things better. I am deeply in your debt for helping me during the rougher times I have been through for the last five years.
It is unbelievable that a stranger would take the trouble giving me all the help I need—no matter how challenging it is. You have been an essential key to a better performance in both my personal and professional life. It is the rare few like you who would step in to lend a hand. Similarly, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Whenever I think (of?) some of the blessings I have, I think of you. It is impossible for me to forget your efforts; those memories will remain close to my heart. It would be hard to stay ahead of the curve without you. In fact, you will be missing.
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It is unbelievable that a stranger would take the trouble giving me all the help I need—no matter how challenging it is. You have been an essential key to a better performance in both my personal and professional life. It is the rare few like you who would step in to lend a hand. Similarly, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Whenever I think (of?) some of the blessings I have, I think of you. It is impossible for me to forget your efforts; those memories will remain close to my heart. It would be hard to stay ahead of the curve without you. In fact, you will be missing.
Would you please check and see whether the whole text is well organized?
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It is unbelievable that a stranger would take the trouble to give me all the help I need—no matter how challenging it is. ") in both my personal and professional life. It is the rare few like you who step in to lend a hand.
- It is unbelievable that a stranger would take the trouble to give me all the help I need—no matter how challenging it is.
- ") in both my personal and professional life.
- It is the rare few like you who step in to lend a hand.
- Similarly, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
- ) Whenever I think about some of the blessings I have, I think of you.
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It is unbelievable that a stranger would take the trouble to give me all the help I need—no matter how challenging it is. You have been an essential key to a better performance (Try to find a better word than "performance.") in both my personal and professional life. It is the rare few like you who step in to lend a hand. Similarly, a friend in need is a friend indeed. (Reconsider
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Please check this for now.
You have been an essential key to a better constructive/positive feedback in (to?) both my personal growth and professional development.
You have been an essential key to a better constructive/positive feedback in (to?) both my personal growth and professional development.
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It is the rare few like you who step in to lend a hand. Similarly, a friend in need is a friend indeed. (Reconsider this last sentence.)
Doesn't fit to be there? I think it is contradictory—but I don’t have any idea for now to fix it.
Doesn't fit to be there? I think it is contradictory—but I don’t have any idea for now to fix it.
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Odessa DawnYou have beenan essential key to a better performancea stalwart figure in both my personal and professional life.
Odessa DawnSimilarly,It is true that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
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