I am writing to my professor for the first time. She asked us to write a brief introductory email since she needs to collect our email addresses.

Please let me know any mistakes I should correct or any improvements I can make!

I am especially concerned about the 'I hope you're enjoying the beautiful weather today.' sentence. I wonder if that is polite enough to use in my first email to the professor. Also is there anything that I could add in the email?

Thank you so much in advance.

-----The actual email-----------------------------------------

Dear Professor A(last name),

I hope you're enjoying the beautiful weather today.

This is ABC from your DDD class 111-11. My student ID is 123456789 and I am majoring in business administration.

I am really looking forward to this class.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

ABC

DDD 111-11