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Essay & Composition Writing
I am writing an essay for school and I have a question about a complex sentence.
Her skin is silky smooth and tanned, nails done in a modest French manicure, makeup flawless, an airbrushed effect, never too much, yet always just perfect.
Would this be correct? I originally had two senteces, but I am trying to eliminate a lot of pronouns. I have a lot of she and hers.
Would this be correct? I originally had two senteces, but I am trying to eliminate a lot of pronouns. I have a lot of she and hers.
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Hi, I am a meat and potatoes type guy. Why not try your question in the English Grammar Section ESL section. Please I would move your message, but you might not find it again.
- Hi, I am a meat and potatoes type guy.
- Why not try your question in the English Grammar Section ESL section.
- Please I would move your message, but you might not find it again.
- So I will let you re-enter your message there.
- MountainHiker
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Hi, I am a meat and potatoes type guy. Why not try your question in the English Grammar Section ESL section. Please
I would move your message, but you might not find it again. So I will let you re-enter your message there.
MountainHiker
I would move your message, but you might not find it again. So I will let you re-enter your message there.
MountainHiker
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