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Little Prince 96 Posted 4 years ago
Letter Writing

I am writing an email to HR. Please help me correct it and look more formal.

Dear P'Ann,

It has already been more than 4 months since my last interview session with McCann. I am really thanks to you because you help me arrange a great talking with General Managers and I have learned a lot from that time. This email just wants to attach my newest updated profile in 2021 and share with you things I have enhanced myself in the last 4 months. I take note of some highlights below: - Expanded my experience with clients from overseas markets like Australia, Canada in the e-Commerce field- Worked with big clients like Panasonic with a budget of up to $70K/ 2 months and ran campaigns on multiple channels, especially programmatic ads.- Am also manage and train team members in digital advertising knowledge- My Thai is above basic and will reach intermediate level soon I'm really grateful for what I have achieved, hard-working and Thai learning journey. I will keep doing it all and wait for opportunities from McCann. Maybe, the next year of 2022 when everything is more positive for us and you can easily have a consider on me. I will prove to you that it is worth hiring an expat like me and my commitment to bringing my value to the company. Best regards,Khanh.
  

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Most of your writing is not natural English. I have attempted to convert it to good business English. It has been more than four months since my last interview with Mr.

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  • It has been more than four months since my last interview with Mr.
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Most of your writing is not natural English. I have attempted to convert it to good business English.

It has been more than four months since my last interview with Mr. / Mrs. / Ms. McCann. I am really thankful that you arranged a great discussion with the general managers and I learned a lot from them.

I have attached my updated CV, which includes my recent achievements. Som

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