I am writing about my life.. this is the topic -

Why is it hard to make friends.. so basically I write about my life, previously. And I need someone who will be helping me correcting my error. I think this will be good for me to become a good writer for college.

So I am writing a true story about my life.. and how i ended up, etc. It will be so long.. ^^
so who's willing to help me? to correct my grammar, vocabulary.. etc.

Here's what I wrote so far.. more to write!

why is it hard to make friends.

Certain people might be lonely but they still move on, and are enjoying their life with their families.
Certain people might have a lot of friends, and are enjoying with them instead with their families.
We all different and we want what's best for us. However, there are bad people and there are good people. People who are lonely usually stays in their cave and play video games whereas people who are not lonely usually go out with their friends and enjoy themselves. When I was a child my dad bought me a sega consoler and bought me some games. I got very addictive to it and my mind usually wander off during classes because I just couldn't wait to get home to play some video games. My dad used to bought me any consolers that came out. Thus, I was so into it that I didn't even go outside to play with friends. And of course, my grades dropped gradually. What's more, I repeated first grade! My dad did not punished me, althought he used to smack my head occasionally and then regretted of hitting me and bought me a game for forgiveness., which I loved it!

Out of essay: Note that I am doing this to learn. I think this is the best way to learn.
Occasionally, when I have time, I am just going to write.. write.. and write. I want to improve my grammar and vocabalary significantly.

And of course, I will be reading books when I have time. I read about 4-5 books far.. I completed Twilight series through audiobook which I understood pretty well - Great book!! I haven't finished the last one yet. I am a lonely guy so I will fulfill

I've decided becoming a nurse.