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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I am sorry to bother you but my teacher is going to have a baby and...
My English teacher is going to have a baby and she will not come to school this semester anymore so I will not have a chance to ask her to correct my composition. Please can you help me, I study in an ordinary school in Brazil and I want to learn English but our only English teacher is going to have a baby and our classes will only start again in March 2006.Thank you for your help and your interest. Please, can you also comment on the structure of my composition? I cannot pay you with money but I wish you and your family a happy Christmas and good health. Thank you and God Bless you.
In the past, along my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden. As everyone knew everyone there, all the adults of the neighborhood stayed cool. Then came the times of studies and my family moved to a bigger town. Graduated, I became responsible for my life; my entertainment activities were always books, music and movies. When it was possible, I left housework to other person.
At the present, being retired, I have much more time to do all things I couldn´t do in the past; thought, my sources of pleasure are now just the same and I don´t still like to be housewife, so this function is not a choice, only an obligation. As the time advanced I saw that I had very few friends worth to maintain contact with.
In the future, I imagine to gain more energy in the batle against some health disturbances to go somewhere in my country. (I only know 4 cities in Brazil) By the way the study of languages will take always a great part in my life. I hope one day to go abroad visiting Europe.
In the past, along my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden. As everyone knew everyone there, all the adults of the neighborhood stayed cool. Then came the times of studies and my family moved to a bigger town. Graduated, I became responsible for my life; my entertainment activities were always books, music and movies. When it was possible, I left housework to other person.
At the present, being retired, I have much more time to do all things I couldn´t do in the past; thought, my sources of pleasure are now just the same and I don´t still like to be housewife, so this function is not a choice, only an obligation. As the time advanced I saw that I had very few friends worth to maintain contact with.
In the future, I imagine to gain more energy in the batle against some health disturbances to go somewhere in my country. (I only know 4 cities in Brazil) By the way the study of languages will take always a great part in my life. I hope one day to go abroad visiting Europe.
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Hi ~Anon, you are very welcome to our forum and we never ask for payment so don't worry about that. Good luck with your studies and I hope you get to Europe one day. You can register here and we will happily help you with your English...
- Hi ~Anon, you are very welcome to our forum and we never ask for payment so don't worry about that.
- Good luck with your studies and I hope you get to Europe one day.
- You can register here and we will happily help you with your English...
- In the past, during my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden.
- As everyone knew everyone there, all the adults of the neighborhood stayed cool (very slangy, that may be the effect you want, but if more formal try 'were very relaxed about it' .
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Hi ~Anon, you are very welcome to our forum and we never ask for payment so don't worry about that. Good luck with your studies and I hope you get to Europe one day. You can register here and we will happily help you with your English...
In the past, during my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden. As everyone knew everyone th
In the past, during my childhood, living in a small town, I used to play in a beautiful garden. As everyone knew everyone th
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