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Didi83 Posted 15 years ago
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I am send an e-mail to my colleges at work checking on their availibilty next week. Could you please proofread this for me?

Dear All,

I hope this e-mail finds you well.

Could you please let me know your availability for Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday of next week by tomorrow, October 27th.

Please follow this link to indicate your availability:

XX

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Please also let me know how I can be of assistance as you move forward with this.

Thank you,

Diana
  

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Hi, colleagues Dear All, I hope this e-mail finds you well. <<< You don't need to say this. Just get to the point.

— Clive

  • Hi, colleagues Dear All, I hope this e-mail finds you well.
  • <<< You don't need to say this.
  • Just get to the point.
  • Could you please let me know your availability for Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday of next week by tomorrow, October 27 th .
  • Do you need to say why you need this information?
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Hi,

colleagues

Dear All,

I hope this e-mail finds you well. <<< You don't need to say this. Just get to the point.

Could you please let me know your availability for Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday of next week by tomorrow, October 27th.

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