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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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I am running for treasure for a club at school...

I am running for treasure for a club at school and i was wondering if any of you can review and check for any grammatical mistakes on my application?

Puente Club Board Application
1) What position are you applying for? And Why?
As to current board members, they define the experience of being a board member to pleasant and fun. As well, the involvement seems to strengthen leadership and clubbability which is vital to success. I will love to get that kind of experience because it will develop me to become a better student. Specifically Secretary of Treasury is the best fit for me because I am well-organized and focused. I find dealing finances and critical thinking which this position withholds. To be honest and fair, I am a very quiet person, but I will lead and present anything if I ever in need to.

2) Why do you think you are the best candidate for this position?
A great treasure is well-organized, attentive, and willing to overcome any financial issue. In that matter, I have those qualities, which makes me the best fit for Secretary of Treasury. I have a great dedication to being treasurer because I have an implicit want for the club to not only to keep going but to prosper and grow. As I am sure that any other current members have the same purpose in mind. One of my best qualities as a student is my organizational skills. I find it pleasant for everything to be well organized, neat, and filed so nothing will ever be lost or ruined. As treasurer, I will ensure to keep any receipts or important files that regard to any of the club's finance well organized. Keeping such things arranged accordingly will make looking back on the club;s expense accurate and easy. Additionally, I am a very immersed and focused when it comes down to anything regarding school or a club. Focus is an important fundamental because it helps the mind to engage fully to anything at the moment. I will be able to be on task and be fully involved to help the club to accomplish their goals and ideas.

3) How can you contribute to the club?
Puente Club is a social association that intends to help their members to transfer to a four-year university, yet maintain a family like community. Being a club member for a semester may seem a short period of time, but the generosity and magnanimity from the other members make you feel as if you have been in the club for many years. I hope, as Secretary of Treasury for Puente Club, to help the club to keep that theme going. Again, I think my organization skills will keep our finances well planned and accordingly.
  

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...it will develop help me to become...
I am...dealing skilled in financial matters
As I am sure that...
family-like community
...my organizing skills...
In #3, the magnanimity (pretty large word, I think)...make me feel as if I have been in the club...

Are your running for treasurer of this club or for Secretary of

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