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00"My research experiences at the university made me think of building a career in Research and Development area. I believe, automotive industry is the best field where I can work with a high sufficiency and personal satisfaction because cars and motor sports are my special interests since my childhood.02br
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00As a materials scientist, I have a strong background in thermodynamics and resultantly in corrosion. In the last semester of my Bachelor’s study, as well as during the Master’s study, I attended courses which were specifically about corrosion processes. I also had the chance to blend scientific and practical knowledge on corrosion, in the well-equipped laboratories of University of .....02br
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00During my studies I worked in teams that consists of well-qualified people from all over the world. I believe I have good communication skills and a competence to integrate myself in any working atmosphere. For around one year, I communicate with my colleagues in German.02br
00I like sports and I do sports regularly. I was a professional soccer referee until I left my home country for my further studies in Germany. I am interested in zoology and botanic and I have a small bonsai collection. I also read books on history and popular science often.02br
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00Although I improved my theoretical knowledge about the field during my studies, I want to build a career with a research experience at a high-tech international company, which is leader in its sector. I feel I am well prepeared to fill the job vacancy that I am applying to and my strong motivation and career goals are good to match for what this job has to offer. (Or this statement: The idea of working at ...., makes me excited, because my personal and scientific interests fit to excellent career opportunities, which the company offers.02br
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00I must emphasize that I will achieve the master degree in April 2007. My residence and work permits will be extended in Mai 2007 for at least one more year. In case of an admission to a work place, the period can be further extended."0-