I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

What is "it"?

Hi,

I am lonely. It blows with winds and sins.

Correct grammatically Yes and makes sense? Does poetic writing have to make sense?



Clive

It doesn't make sense to me.

I assume that the wind is what blows, so that means the wind blows with winds (and sins).

It's a little like saying one's head is painful with pains or aching with aches, isn't it?

I don't know what the metaphor of sins blowing is supposed to mean either. Maybe we just need more of this poem before its meaning and/or symbolism becomes more

My being lonely

I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins
No lie, I stayed in these rooms on my own
I am not strong enough against you
Don't let me stay without you
I have just come to my senses

The main problem is that you have just slapped together various emotional phrases. They are not tied together grammatically or as discourse; there has been no construction of a poem.

'It' seems to refer to loneliness, though only the proximity of 'lonely' to 'it' suggests that; however, there is no other referent I can see.

It is not a poem, lyrics translation.

Ah. That explains everything.