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Task 2: Traditional classrooms in the past held lectures with multiple participants. Now that technology makes it easier and faster for students to access information, the need for traditional classroom discussion is becoming less popular. It’s because the internet is a more effective method than the regular classroom.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What is your personal opinion?

Despite many arguments about the demand of traditional classroom in internet decade is decreasing dramatically, but in my point of view traditional class room still have an important role for education. Especially it is very important for young student.

Firstly, Traditional Classroom is the only environment for communication interactive effectively. Communication skill is the key role for development of children and young adults also, therefore, for these learner, Model of Traditional Classroom is mandatory requirement. Training via Internet environment cannot provide a real communication interactive environment, therefore, learners will not have opportunity for learning this skill. For instant, when we learn in internet, we only can learn via videos and materials and limited interactive with Instructors and classmate while traditional classroom we can sit beside them, discuss with them and learn the new thing easily via communication.

Secondly, only learning via traditional classroom student can learn another important skill for their real life while learning via internet they may not get it for their real life. The activities beside of a traditional classroom will let them learn about their world surround, not only with the subject they will learn. For example, they will learning in laboratory for understand the real thing, learning how to make presentation for report their subjects or learn how to work with a team. Via learning in internet, it is impossible for student can get a complete skills for their future live.

In sum, despite learning internet very convenient and easier than learning via classroom traditional, but students will get more beneficial from learning via class room traditional. In my point of view, learning via internet only suitable for adults and had enough skills for self-study only.