I am learning writing, could anyone please revise it or give me comments?

Essay is a type of articles to deliver ideas or opinions to readers. So, the standard of a good essay should be its capability to convey the ideas and facts accurately in an attractive way.

Just like a saying says, “no one can please everybody”; to impress everyone is also beyond the ability of any good essay. So, before we rest our hands on keyboard, we must be very clear who are targets of our essay. That means we should know who they are by their names, we should also know where are their interest; they are civilized, nice people, or barbarians. Barbarians want food; we can toss meat in front of them to catch their attentions before we can start to talk. For civilized people like us, whose focuses are more diverse, and subtle, we have to do something to make our topics appealing. For people who want power, we can start from the lifestyle of president of United States. For people who want money, we can introduce from Wall street business events, even though we want to get their pockets empty.

Once we succeed in catching their attentions and inspiring their desires to read, we need skills to deliver ideas and facts accurately and effectively. We should do our best to avoid any grammar mistakes, and make our statement vividly to keep them reading to the end of the paragraph. As to how they are going to react, they may be happy, angry, and disappointed, but that is none of our business.

Concerning essay is targeting at people, it should adopt language styles that people feel comfortable to read. The errors from grammar and spelling could undermine the confidence readers may have on the opinions.